Saturday, December 22, 2007

More DFA

I finally "finished" meaning I need to move on and stop working on this. lotta detail, I like how this turned out overall, kind of an experiment, would do things differently if I were to do it over, think I learned quite a bit on this.

P.S. I tried to make a sort of cut out paper look on this, sort of last minute, but I like it overall. I say that becuse its hard to see on the small version, so click for the bigger version :-P

7 comments:

Alex said...

u keep getting better and better jholt. :) <3 sigh. i miss u like a bruddah.

Liron Topaz said...

I think you should try and add some various papers textures. Could be interesting. Since you have this cut out feel to it, I think that could be a nice touch.

Jonathan said...

Yeah, I was noticing that lately, with other people's stuff, that they have realyl strong paper texture feel as well, I may try that, doesn't seem liek it would be that hard to put in.

I miss you too Alex! You're never on IM! See you soon :-) <3

Gigi said...

this is awesome!!!! i love it!!! do an animation like that!!! oh! check out this woman!!!!

http://www.meganbrain.com/

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Fat Nat said...

I think this has a really nice feel and a cool little story taking place with the poses you have used.
I think a little paper texture would be interesting to try out as was already suggested.
My only other suggestion is to maybe have some foreground elements on the side of the street closer to us. It would help add depth and also break up the long horizintal lines on the bottom. (e.g. garbage can, streetlight, parked car etc.)

Hett said...

This is awesome. STOP working on it! You need to finish your animation! Looks fantastic.

Jonathan said...

thanks everybody, and that site is awesome gigi, thanks!!!